Story typed

It was a night like any other in con-con and jhon was doing his normal round as a police officer. He was driving his car alone by the streets of con-con when he saw a ufo in the middle of the street. Jhon goes out o the car and enters in to the ufo.

Its had a bad smell, like a smell of dead people. In the ufo was very tecnological and there were 3 dead persons with a outfit of the military. Jhon was a little scared but he continued searching for something interesting in the UFO. He started to hear a electromagnetic sound, he turn around and there was a robot. Jhon saw that and started to ran. Jhon was running while he heard a siren of the police.he run outside and there was ten cars of the police an a military tank. He ran to the cars and the police officer save him. When jhon was saved the tank fire and the robot died. After that came a toe truck and it took the ufo

The next day in the town was a ceremony to conmemorate the people who saved the world of the robot. Jhon got the special medal and 100 millions chilean pesos

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reading into writing

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Trinity task

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My common mistakes

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Portfolio task- creative and descriptive writing, nº 3

                                   A surprise party

   the 1st of may was the birthday of a friend, he was named benjamin. He went two years to lived in Antofagasta and he came to viña 1 month. I decided to do a surprise  strageness him.
   To do this surprise party I had to told to the mother of my friend,  call my friend to tell about the party.
Organize the food and find a place to do this party.
  We do the party in my house. I invite benjamin to my house and when he enter to my house, he look all my fiends saying, SURPRISEE!!. In his face was a big smile, he was very happy.
   We eat and we dance with some girls that I invite. That party was Awesome.

Portfolio task- creative and descriptive writting, nº 5

My trip to the south

   In the summer I went to the south, we visited Puerto Varas, Chiloe, Futalelfu, Bariloche an Pucon.
I will talk about Bariloche. Barilocheis a beautiful place, it is a city o Argentina.
   The landscape is amazing, green hills and a beautiful lake.We went up a hill on a lift. I was named Otto. Up the hill was a spinning restaurant. The food was delicious.
   In the hotel we met a family in the barbecue area. I played ping pong with a boy named Andres. He is 13 years old. I won the match of ping pong.
        Bariloche is a very beautiful place, yo can do a lot of  things and I think I will go Again